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chrissydome
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0 posted 2003-11-28 05:47 AM


i wouldn't cross the ocean
would never grow a tree
wouldn't share my pillow
or renounce my cup of tea

wouldn't change the way i look
or the things i do
would never walk more than an inch
just to get to you

i wouldn't paint the sky
be there whenever you call
i could bring you a sandwich
but that might be all

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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-11-28 10:35 AM


Interesting look at "endless love". I guess in other words, he isn't worth the salt in your tears? lol. Welcome to Passions! Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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2 posted 2003-12-02 09:18 PM


I can understand a lot of that.  Not changing for someone else.  But, I don't get the grow a tree thing.  And, "would never walk more than an inch"?  Now that might be pushing it just a little bit; everyone has to give a LITTLE bit.  lol

But a sandwich would really be nice.  I am kind of hungry.

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