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chrissydome
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germany

0 posted 2003-11-28 05:45 AM


where is your broom, where is your hat?
where do you hide your mysterious teeth?
where is your raven, where is your cat?
where is your evil breed?

a darkened room in the middle of the night
noone knows what happened here
it might be better like this, at least for you
still you don't know that this will get severe

a glance - and hush - noone says a word
your appearance sets the world apart
i don't know what you think, but you seem proud
as there's dignity in your eyes, but not in your heart

dancing around the fire
you throw anyone inside
eating all the entrails
of those who never died
qualms don't seem to exist
or at least you never show
you just go on hurting
there's no quid pro quo

© Copyright 2003 Christina Domene - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-11-28 08:02 AM


Welcome to Passions!

This is a powerful write, with some tough feelings.

Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-11-28 08:23 AM


chrissydome
It must be hallowe'en, good write.

Hockeychick19
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3 posted 2003-11-28 08:50 AM


Chrisydome,

Good write. I can't wait to read many more.

Welcome to Passions

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2003-11-28 10:37 AM


Chrissydome~

Welcome to passions, we are glad you are here....I hope you will enjoy your stay with us....please check youe email for a special greeting
Greeneyes~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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Gaia
5 posted 2003-11-28 11:20 AM


Welcome to Passions!

I left my broom outside
in the cold
and it froze solid.
Hmm, perhaps some hearts
appear to be equally cold,
in need of some warmth.

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-11-28 01:16 PM






(big hugggsssssss) Somehow I think that all witches have a part in them that never changes but all at once their black magic can control their spirits, this is a powerful debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Chrissy, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chrissy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
7 posted 2003-11-28 01:42 PM


Wow I know someone like this except for one thing.. this person is male..So is that a Warlock? Wonder where all the casualties go, don't you? Maybe he burns them, and sniffs the ashes. I wouldn't doubt it. This is dark.
Love,
Terri~

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