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Making Love
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Making Love |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Making Love I just wish that I could tell him all the feelings deep inside I don’t want to hold back anything, or let discretion hide All the wondrous new beginnings, all the beauty that I see Shining through the eyes that never knew the love inside of me She will never need to tell me of the deepness of her love For she shows me in her loving just what she is thinking of And I know that I’m the one for her, but she prefers to show In the way that she caresses me, what I already know How I wish that I could say the words that linger in my heart How his love has given me new life, and life a brand new start But I can’t express my feelings. I don’t know where to begin He is everything I want and every want that dwells within There’s no need for words between us when our love is so divine That the meaning she conveys has paused the earth in endless time She has subtle ways of showing all her love and her desires She’s a woman who portrays her mind in heat of midnight fires There’s no manner of expressing how much love my heart can hold I would like to tell him inner thoughts that somehow I withhold Little sighs of pleasure, sweetest sounds I ever heard And when we're making love, there is no need to say a word Elizabeth Santos 11/28/03 [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (11-28-2003 08:22 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
simply beautiful and a gorgeous description of love |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was lovely, Liz! I enjoyed the perspective that moved back and forth between the man and woman in this piece. Very nicely done. Much enjoyed the feelings this portrayed!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Elizabeth, I really enjoyed this one. You described everything so well that I could picture it all while I was reading. Great write. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful Elizabeth.. and I love the way you expressed feelings from both the male and female. Extremely well written. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ To love and be loved |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Liz, this poem caught me off guard a little at first...but not for long... You captured those moments well... But, who would ever expect less from you...certainly not I... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Excellent, I would say all of that and more.  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ooh, a Liz & Liz duet... I like this! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzyLady~ I just love the  of you in this entire piece~*Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now THAT is "Making Love" ~ and you both seem to do it very well! I am happy for you, Lady Liz. Life appears to be good for you! This spoke to my heart. Thank you.  Lovin' hugs 'n smiles, Linda |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A beautiful poem. Jason |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love how you portray both points of view as love should be able to feel from both sides, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless you, sweet friend, your heart beams with love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
It is snowing and windy This morning, Here in these mountains, But waking up to this has warmed me up....:-) A beautiful interaction between Yin and Yang....love it _______ice ><> |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Simply beautiful!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This IS beauty... excellent. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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