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jaicie114
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0 posted 2003-11-27 10:38 PM


Laugh like
A joyful child

Sleep like
A sated lover

Live from
The center
Of your heart

And the Universe
Is yours


Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2003 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
Margot
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1 posted 2003-11-27 10:50 PM


jc,

Beautiful

Margot

jaicie114
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2 posted 2003-11-27 10:55 PM


Thank you, Margot...

I'm usually much "wordier" than this! LOL But, this one seemed complete with such few words.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-11-29 10:58 AM


That's beautiful and good advice, dear jaicie!
Love, Margherita

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-11-29 11:02 AM


From the heart...with beauty and truth.
Thank you Jc.


Love,
Eric

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-11-29 01:07 PM


awesome!
jaicie114
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6 posted 2003-11-29 06:00 PM


Margherita, Eric, and passing shadows...

Thank you so much for your comments. Hey, Eric...I'm "getting there" with the brevity...huh?  LOL

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-12-02 12:24 PM


Beautiful thoughts...James
jaicie114
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8 posted 2003-12-02 12:26 PM


Why, thank you, James...glad you enjoyed it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

dr_jones
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9 posted 2003-12-02 12:31 PM


What a lovely piece, I very much enjoyed it thankyou.
jaicie114
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10 posted 2003-12-02 12:33 PM


And, what a lovely reply, dr_j!

Thank you...I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Love and Light...jc


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (12-02-2003 12:34 AM).]

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-12-02 12:55 PM


~ and may the Universe be yours for such a divine write! That was absolutlely beautiful!
The perfect recipe for a happy and satisfying life!

Warm hugs and a big smile!
EA

jaicie114
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12 posted 2003-12-02 12:59 PM


Why, thank you, EA...I'm certainly glad you enjoyed it! I thought the recipe had a certain charm!  

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

titch k
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13 posted 2003-12-02 01:59 AM


what wise words my friend
you have just baked the perfect cake
love Titch

SharaRose
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14 posted 2003-12-02 02:03 AM


Just beautiful...made my heart jump like a song!!!
Love,
Terri~

Sparticus
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15 posted 2003-12-02 09:40 AM


Beautifully done, a very happy sounding piece.

Toes still tapping!

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

jaicie114
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16 posted 2003-12-03 01:23 AM


titch...glad you enjoyed the snack!

SharaRose...so happy I could touch your heart.

Sparticus...tap on!!!  

Thank you all for your gracious replies.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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