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jaicie114
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-11-27 10:33 PM



The softness of your touch
Is the fluttering
Of a butterfly’s wing,
An angel’s kiss
In the misty morning light,
Or the summer breeze
From the ocean’s crest.

The beauty of your love
Is the radiance
Of the dawn,
The earthiness of
The falling leaves,
Or the last drop of dew
From the petal’s edge.

I can lose myself in
That touch…
I can sacrifice myself to
That beauty.
For to surrender,
And become One,
Is the ultimate reality.


Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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Margot
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1 posted 2003-11-27 10:52 PM


jc,

awesome

Margot

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
2 posted 2003-11-27 11:00 PM


awwwwww....thank you, Margot!

Love and Light...jc


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-28 03:59 AM


definitely beautiful
jaicie114
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4 posted 2003-11-28 08:18 AM


Thank you, passing shadows...

I truly appreciate your comment.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Magnus
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5 posted 2003-11-28 09:17 AM


It can not get much better than this....

Well said...  

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
6 posted 2003-11-28 12:41 PM


Thank you so much for the beautiful comment, Magnus.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-11-28 05:00 PM


Nice...James
Ericc
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8 posted 2003-11-29 10:57 AM


Oh wow Jc...I'm so glad I found this one!
It's beautiful!


Love,
Eric

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever
9 posted 2003-11-29 06:15 PM


Thank you, James.

I am sincerely grateful that you like it.

And, my dear Eric...I, too, am glad you found it and also find it beautiful. Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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