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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-11-27 09:42 PM


Miracle

I can’t see your eyes,
You always seem to make my heartbeat rise,
But I’m sad,
Because I want to be with you, but I can’t.

You’re sick,
I wish I could be there with you,
To hold you,
To help heal you,
In my own loving and special way.

You’re a miracle,
My miracle,
Your love has done nothing,
But open and begin to heal me,
I’ve never been loved the way you love me,
You complete me.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-27 09:52 PM


Hopefully the intended will read this write from the heart.
Happy Day to you, Kelly!

Hockeychick19
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2 posted 2003-11-27 10:24 PM


Midnitesun, thanks for stopping by. Happy Day to you too.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

martina
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3 posted 2003-11-28 01:37 PM


This one is good. It was really understandilbe.

       martina

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4 posted 2003-11-28 01:51 PM


That's the key..completing each other!!!
Lovely, and so heartfelt.
Love,
Terri~

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5 posted 2003-11-28 01:55 PM



This -

'I’ve never been loved the way you love me,
You complete me'


- says sooooooooo much~
Thanks for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

Hockeychick19
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6 posted 2003-11-28 02:13 PM


Martina - I'm glad you liked it.

Terri - Thank you... I believe that too.

Marge - Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you everyone
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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