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Margot
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0 posted 2003-11-27 06:25 PM



I AM...

I am a poet with an angel I dance
I wonder how lost I'd be without the chance
I hear your sweet gossamer wings
I see you and my heart begins sings
I want to see life through the love you bring
I am a poet with an angel I dance

I pretend to slip your hand in mine
I feel then the spark divine
I touch the stars on a moonless night
I worry that you didn't see your own light
I cry because we lost our delight
I am a poet with an angel I dance

I understand your love lives in my heart
I say that we are never apart
I dream of tomorrows still wrapped in your love
I try to accept that you are above
I hope and I dance with the man I dream of
I am a poet with an angel I dance

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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Nan
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1 posted 2003-11-27 08:16 PM


This is a wonderful challenge and you've met it beautifully - Very nicely done, Margot...
Margot
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2 posted 2003-11-27 10:00 PM


Nan,

Thank you very much

Margot

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-11-27 11:57 PM


Margot, this is a hauntingly beautiful poem. The "I Am" challenge was met in a unique and fascinating manner!

Warm hugs,
EA

Margot
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4 posted 2003-11-28 01:47 AM


Earth Angel,

You honor me. Thank you very much

Margot

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5 posted 2003-11-28 03:17 AM


this is just beautiful!
titch k
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6 posted 2003-11-28 04:18 AM


hello SMILE
what a beautiful sentience to bring alive
with Divine implications...lifting throughout
love Titch

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