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Alliance New Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 2 |
Hello everyone! I hope I will like this forum. Well, this is a very short poem that I have writtin. I'm 15 if anyone wants to know. I look into the sky, And what do I see? A crimson sun looking down on me It heals my soul and refines my skin And still it burns within. |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Alliance, Short but sweet Margot |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous first post, sweet friend, you have such poetic grace for someone so young and I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, you are special as we believe everyone has a wonderful voice to share here that's special, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and...Happy Thanksgiving to you and all your loved ones! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely first poem, so bright and happy. Write on! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to Passions....we are so glad you are here, this is a beautiful first post, and I will look forward to more... please check your email for a special greeting Greeneyes~ I had a dream last night |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice write Alliance, the last line "And still it burns within". Gives the entire over-all poem a metaphoric aura. Sorry if I'm wrong. Enjoyed. poe If nothing is something |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
I was very happy to see your age. It seems to me there are not enough interested in what I feel the fire of poetry. The poem flowed well with much inspiration. I encourage you to keep writing and posting. pictureme :-) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alliance~ Welcome to Passions~ An enjoyable first read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have a feeling you will like it here...I have been around for over four years.... Welcome to Passions  good first post! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Welcome, Alliance... Very nice verse...thank you for sharing your art. I will look forward to more. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Daniel Michael New Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 4Rochester Hills, Michigan |
Good job, short and uplifting. Dan [This message has been edited by Daniel Michael (11-30-2003 09:18 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! an enjoyable fine write! WELCOME to Passions!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Wonderful entrance post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ To love and be loved |
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