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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-11-27 10:54 AM




To be this.

The vanished drop that rained its
final grace across the reaches
of your cheek.

To be this.

The summers warmth caught to the
breeze...as it brushes soft
against your skin.

To be this.

To be the more that waits past
the limits of desire.

To be...

This.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-11-27 10:56 AM


Ericc,
Well done enjoyed.


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2 posted 2003-11-27 11:03 AM



     This...

...is one I wish I'd written. Very nice, very nice indeed.

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Margot
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3 posted 2003-11-27 11:48 AM


Ericc

Excellent

Margot

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-11-27 11:51 AM


The magic of love is just...this...

Beautifully written.

TD

ecrivan
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5 posted 2003-11-27 12:30 PM


enjoyed the take on 'this'..most often I do 'that'..hehe


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6 posted 2003-11-27 12:31 PM


enjoyed
jaicie114
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7 posted 2003-11-27 08:32 PM


My dear Eric...

Your mastery to sing us the most delicate and enchanting love songs is simply....this.

Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-11-27 08:34 PM


Beautiful as always Eric!
Happy Thanksgiving!
Hugs~

      ~ To love and be loved
is to feel the sun from both sides ~

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-11-27 09:06 PM


this

is all I need

Hockeychick19
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10 posted 2003-11-27 09:25 PM


Eric,

This... is very well written. Super

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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11 posted 2003-11-27 09:40 PM





(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, and may you forever extend past this and find "that" always in loves eyes, God Bless You, Happy Thanksgiving, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

  

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Margherita
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12 posted 2003-11-29 11:00 AM


This touch is divine, dear Eric.
I love you. Margherita

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13 posted 2003-11-29 11:07 AM


Eric, this is so beautiful, and
peaceful feeling. It is
wonderful to have ~this~ in
our lives. Isn't it?  
Hugs to you,  
Ethel

SharaRose
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14 posted 2003-11-29 12:37 PM


Awww it's that "this" that makes life worth it all. (that closeness) How romantic is this! Loved this! Beautiful, precious words! Full of heart.
Love,
Terri~


[This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-29-2003 12:41 PM).]

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