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Keth
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0 posted 2003-11-27 08:49 AM


Where feathers may guide me
Fortuna offers silky boots
Tomorrow there, a silent wind
Sweet scent of mornig roses

Run, run! Don't hesitate
Golden rays will embrace you
Run, run! Time has called
To follow you on drifting blooms

Realms of dawning skies await
Yesterday past, a warm whisper
Circles will be closed to doors
Where feathers may guide me.

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-11-27 10:29 AM


Beautiful!

Eric

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2 posted 2003-11-27 10:56 AM


I   L I K E   Y O U R   S T Y L E !

You've got a very nice voice, and I like what you say with it. You, I'll read for sure.

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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-11-27 10:59 AM


Keth,
A delightful read.

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4 posted 2003-11-27 04:24 PM





(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this reminded me of Forrest Gump as the same feather seemed to pass right on to his son, God Bless You, Happy Thanksgiving, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Keth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-27-2003 04:25 PM).]

Blush
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Ky
5 posted 2003-11-27 08:48 PM


Its very different and unique
I liked it a nice soft floating feathery feeling
Nicely done
BTW Nice to meet ya
I am sorta new here and I just posted one also
Do come by and see me won't you
Blessings
Susan~~~

Kethry
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6 posted 2003-11-27 11:24 PM


Welcome Keth,
I hope you enjoy being here, sorry the full version of your name is already taken. I like what you've written.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2003-11-28 04:01 AM


good stuff!
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8 posted 2003-11-28 07:33 AM


Keth, really good writing, your name gave me quite a start because Kethry, whom I always call Keth is my heart sister. And seeing your name I thought you were her for a moment, however your writing is entirely different so I won't be confused again.

Really excellent writing I like your style is is very good.

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy


Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

[This message has been edited by Marsha (11-28-2003 07:34 AM).]

iliana
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9 posted 2003-12-21 12:10 PM


Keth -- this was beautiful -- I'll be reading you.  
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