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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2003-11-27 07:48 AM


I won't let you fall to far
I won't let you destroy you
I won't let you destroy me
I won't let you play the game
I won't let you hurt this
I won't let you push the buttons
I won't let you walk away
I won't let you toss all the dreams on the floor
I won't let the ashes lie
I won't let you
I won't let you
I won't let you do this all over again
I won't let you do this all over again
I won't
I won't


Love,
Ladycat

Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-11-27 01:21 PM


And well you do if you won't let him ...
this sounds like a drum, incisive.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-11-27 01:24 PM


now that's painful
Temptress
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3 posted 2003-12-02 12:11 PM


Then don't.


Its good to see you posting again, Lady.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


dr_jones
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4 posted 2003-12-02 12:24 PM


Dont let pain taunt you this way, be strong and enjoy life.
SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-12-02 02:43 AM


Don't let this break you. It's no fun. Count the costs. Is it good for you, or them? Without your sanity you are no good to anyone. You need to be purring again, miss Ladycat..
Love,
Terri~

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-02-2003 02:44 AM).]

Loverlost
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6 posted 2003-12-02 08:50 AM


Have you been reading my mind Ladycat...or just my poems?

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX
7 posted 2003-12-02 09:29 AM


Thank you all for reading my piece. It is the holidays after all. The feelings that come with the holidays beside joy are hurt and depression too.

I'm just expressing the other side of life.

Love,
Ladycat

Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

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