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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-11-27 01:02 AM



Lost in the essence of you.
Winding my way through your mind
Past the shiny radiance of your soul
And into that gentlest of places…
Your heart.

Finding myself in your love.
Seeing in me what I see in you
Holding the mirror just right
So the reflections always catch
The light.

Discovering you in my thoughts.
Identifying each little piece
As if there might be a way
To lose any part of you in
My life.

Cherishing the miracle of us.
Feeling the heart beat faster
And the stomach get tighter
At the mere utterance of,
“I’m here.”

Knowing that our time together
In this realm and in this time
With these paltry little skins is
Nothing more than our introduction
To eternity.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-11-27 05:33 AM


very nice...what an ending line!
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-11-27 08:13 AM


Delightful! You are beautifully inspired.
Love, Margherita

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-11-27 10:31 AM


Wonderful Jc...your words flow towards the perfect ending...that hints at new beginnings.

Love,
Eric

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-11-27 11:55 AM


beautiful! what a great write to give your loved one.
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
5 posted 2003-11-27 08:29 PM


Dear Passing Shadows, Margherita, Eric, and Midnitesun...

Thank you so much for your gracious comments. I am sincerely happy that you enjoyed this one.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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