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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-11-26 11:05 PM



Loose particles and silver slivers
seem impossible to grasp
limiting the hold
abandoned by those closest to home
searching for a kindred spirit
floating endlessly in cyberspace
miles away and so far out reach
colliding stars on the runway
streamline through a galaxy
leaving nothing to be desired
rolling water under waves
dilating eyes in dark contrasts
a reality envisioned
twists and turns
until the blue becomes invisible
drifting wing tips on the wind
riding out the endless tides
accumulating clouds
condensing on the pane
breathing deep unto the heavens
above and beyond
without a plan
as the moment dissolves
slipping silk through my hands
pours like rain
until there is nothing left
shaded in the fall
bleeding colors
overlapping
grounded between the folds
that come between here and now
and never lands~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Happy Thanksgiving to you...
I've missed you all so much,
just been busy sorting out my 'real life'
But I can do this!!!
Just like the little train that could!
I think I can, I think I can.....

Many Hugs to you~

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-11-26 11:18 PM


Yes Lori, I know you can too hon.  So very good to see you back, you have been missed!
Happy Thanksgiving to you too

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-11-26 11:23 PM


searching for a kindred spirit
floating endlessly in cyberspace
miles away and so far out reach
colliding stars on the runway
streamline through a galaxy
leaving nothing to be desired
rolling water under waves
dilating eyes in dark contrasts


such a vastness out there with nothing and everything all at once.......and have a happy thanksgiving.....

Ratleader
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
3 posted 2003-11-26 11:27 PM


Good to see a Blues poem here..... and good to see YOU.

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-11-26 11:31 PM


I felt as tho' I was in a celestial free-fall with surreal images swirling around me... and where I'll land I do not know...

Hi, Lori! Good to read another gem from your pen!

Have a Happy Day of Giving Thanks!

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-26-2003 11:31 PM).]

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-11-26 11:45 PM


Here's hoping you have a warm and Happy Thanksgiving, Lori, and that you'll stay close to this home and share your songs of life with us.
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2003-11-27 12:01 PM


Donna~ Your name suits you so well,
thank you for sharing your gentle spirit with me.  
My best to you and yours.

Back at you Michele...everything all at once!!  You know it!!  
Thank you for being here girlie~

YOU too big guy~ and thank you so much
for being a special friend to me Ed~

Linda~ Yes, I do feel like I'm free falling right about now,
I only hope I will land on my own two feet one of these days.
(I'm keeping my fingers crossed anyway)  
Thank you so much for reading me sweetie~  

My songs of life?  I kinda like the sound of that!
Thank you so much for your heartfelt reply Kacy~
Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family~

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
7 posted 2003-11-27 12:34 PM


Hi, Blues...

Thank you for this extraordinary verse. It is so full of beautiful images.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
8 posted 2003-11-27 01:57 AM


Hello jc, thanks for letting me know you liked this, and *welcome*  

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
9 posted 2003-11-27 05:36 AM


Happy Thanksgiving Lori....glad to have you around when you can get here...don't get burnt out on real life though
Blush
Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56
Ky
10 posted 2003-11-27 05:59 AM


Beautifully done
I haven't been by forever either
Seems like you and I both decide to post one tonight
Happy Thanksgiving to you also
Do drop by and see me
Blessings
Susan~~~~

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
11 posted 2003-11-28 10:21 AM


Knowing how things have been for you, it's amazing to me that such sweet and gentle verse could come from you right now. I don't know whether to hug you or salute.



~~J

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