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Margot
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0 posted 2003-11-26 06:55 PM


Rich embrace

The greatest wealth was in his face
The richness of his sure embrace
The kisses that led me to grace
Instead of lost in an empty place

I knew not what peace faith could bring
As in his heart my heart took wing
His whispered muse taught mine to sing
To my body his brought a zing

The tears of loss wont be denied
A thousand tears I think I've cried
And some days yet, no I wont hid
I really want him by my side

Somehow he still remains with me
Though his body has set soul free
His parting breath whispered the key
Of faith in what we cannot see

Margot Hill
18Nov03

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

© Copyright 2003 Margot Hill - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-11-26 11:51 PM


it seems you have a wonderful memory to embrace
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-11-28 04:40 PM


Nice writing...James
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3 posted 2003-11-28 04:48 PM


Lots and lots of feelings,  yearnings and
past memories...all nicely said..

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