Parting Tokens . . . . . . tanka

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Open Poetry #30

Parting Tokens . . . . . . tanka

James_A_Fraser
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0 posted 2003-11-26 06:34 PM

Parting Tokens

One lock of your hair,
a tiny wisp of perfume,
your voice within me...
could any man own riches
enough to buy such treasure?

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (11-26-2003 06:35 PM).]

Margot
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1 posted 2003-11-26 06:41 PM

James,

Excellent! powerful in a few words

Margot

Sunshine

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2 posted 2003-11-26 08:35 PM

Poignant, Sir, very poignant!

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-11-27 10:38 AM

Perfect.

Eric

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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4 posted 2003-11-27 06:36 PM

Beautiful work, Jamie... money in the bank can never buy such treasures... only a loving heart can appreciate what wealth he has in them. *S*

Blush
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since 2002-08-31

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Ky

5 posted 2003-11-27 08:55 PM

I do so love Tanka's may have to post one soon & I loved this one

I am sorta new here and I just posted one too
Would love for you drop by and see me also
Blessings
Susan~~~`

Martie

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6 posted 2004-01-08 12:00 PM

Jamies

These kinds of treasure are given with love, no purchased gift could mean as much. It is a man with a tender heart that knows this.

Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06

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7 posted 2004-01-08 02:12 AM

pricelessly beautiful

many blessings
Eno

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Read and live and love and heal!

Marge Tindal

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8 posted 2004-01-08 11:40 AM

Jamie~
THIS IS A TREASURE~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

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Victoria Australia

9 posted 2004-01-08 03:42 PM

priceless!

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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