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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-11-26 05:36 PM


All You Need Is Love


I tried to love her
but all my efforts
failed to inspire her desires
and so I found myself all alone
in a romantic blunder land
reaching out for a touch of love
with no one there to
hold my hand.

JamesLee
November24
2003


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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2003-11-26 10:19 PM


Oh James

This one was a real tear jerker.

"In dreams and in love
there are no impossibilities"

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-11-27 01:16 PM


Dear James, that's sad, but you go on reaching out!
I love these short writes of yours, you capture the situation so well.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-27 01:40 PM


there's always someone there to hold your hand...
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-11-27 01:45 PM


James,
I think Passing is right, there is always someone. Good write

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