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vandana
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0 posted 2003-11-26 04:49 PM


It is alright
To give love away
To live forever
I alreadly lost my heart
to you
To learn you
To win your heart
To follow your heart
And words you say
Each day
Each moment passed by
I give my heart to you
Each day
I prayed for every moment
I spent with you
I lost my heart to you
I realize
how precious is love
To give away
When I lost my heart to you.....
I give my heart and soul.....
To you

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-11-26 05:18 PM


yes, it is ok to give your heart away
Ericc
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2 posted 2003-11-27 10:40 AM


Beautiful.

Eric

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-11-28 11:09 AM


Vandana, this is a beautioful poem.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-11-28 11:13 AM


vandana
Very nice.

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2003-11-28 11:14 AM


Beautiful Vandana.  Check your email.  
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-11-28 12:30 PM


just gorgeous!
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-11-28 12:35 PM


Your loving heart deserves to be held with utmost care, respect and gentleness by he who is fortunate enough to receive it.

Warm hugs,
EA

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8 posted 2003-11-28 12:43 PM


very lovely dear one....
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-11-28 01:47 PM


Very sweet words. Lovely it is to be able to give to the one that will cherish, and honor that.
Love,
Terri~

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10 posted 2003-11-28 05:45 PM




(smiles) Yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, always let your heart give and you will be given so much in return and receive that gift of love you dream of! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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