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Open Poetry #30
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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
0 posted 2003-11-26 04:14 PM



Cold heart damp minds
brains that are full
but out of time

the wind blows mindlessly
through my hair. The bitterness
oh the bitterness and despair

Lonely inside just want to
walk up and go away for awhile..
the pain oh the unstable pain
day in and day out.

coming back to me whenever
it feels fit oh god i wish
i wish it would just quit.

everyday everyway I can't get
rid of it. spoiling my plans
making people shine away.

Ignorance is bliss that is all
I have to say.


It hasnt been edited yet or even have a titled I cant seem to figure out one. Any help would be good
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-11-26 05:20 PM

The title..."Ignorance Is Bliss"...James
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-11-26 07:15 PM

Thanks What did you think of the poem though.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....
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