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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2003-11-26 04:12 PM



Did you cast a spell or brew love potions,
Was that newts claws that I saw you grinding,
Venus Potion to gain my devotion,
Was the magic inside you spellbinding?
Do unicorns run free in your memory?
And the mermaids of the sea sing for you,
For only in my deepest memory,
Did your own magic awaken me too?
As add dragon scales to the crushed newt claws,
Did you steal a single hair from my head?
Did you steal my heart then to break the laws?
Did you care as you broke my heart instead?
As magic flared inside me, could you see?
And when you left your charm dispersed in me.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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1 posted 2003-11-26 05:50 PM


hello, Moon dust!
Enjoyed the read, though it sounds sad, as if someone has given you a very bitter potion to swallow.
Maybe our good poetic witch Karen can break this spell with a more powerful potion.

Suetang
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2 posted 2003-11-26 10:18 PM


Hello Maria

I really enjoyed reading your words and it's nice to see someone from the U.K.

I hope all is well on your side of the world.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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