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titch k
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since 2003-11-25
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0 posted 2003-11-26 03:37 PM



My Beloved you look at me,
   with the chasteness, of a moonflower;

etched in the red thin-sky;
  there is no tomorrow in my heart;

your love swallows, with the rush
  of all drifting worlds;

fixed with shooting stars
   and the infinity of space;

clouds conceived, between promise
   of Autumn and Springtime;

as she bathes blossoms, a nod and a bow
  no-one paying ransom;

fragrant blooms, borne with childish mind;
  from tears, and sadness free;

every pleasant sight beneath
  every shared ache, with honeyed reverance;

as the Gods yearn mountaintops;  clothed in clover;
   midst holy isles of bright divinity;

Congratulations oh silent lover, whose gentle gust;
My spirit rushed together, at the touching of your lips

Titch


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-26 04:04 PM


Titch,
Your writing has a song birds pitch. Enjoyed


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-11-26 04:06 PM


Titch, you touch! ~ with those heartfelt words. A beautifully descriptive poem full of emotion.


EA

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