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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-11-26 01:13 PM


In the desire of our mingling spirits
your touch
like the feel of smooth warm leather
caresses my heart
and in polished moves
the wooden floor groans
as the burning embers subside
I become
the glad rag-doll

BloomingRose


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-11-26 05:17 PM


your touch
like the feel of smooth warm leather
caresses my heart


a beautiful thought, Debra *s

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2 posted 2003-11-26 05:22 PM


a soft meltdown, heh?
enjoyed the write

Margot
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3 posted 2003-11-26 06:48 PM


BloomingRose

Wonderful

Margot

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4 posted 2003-11-27 12:43 PM


In the desire of our mingling spirits
your touch
like the feel of smooth warm leather
caresses my heart


Very, very beautiful writing Debra.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-11-27 12:46 PM


Simply beautiful from start to finish.  Lovely read.
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6 posted 2003-11-27 05:41 AM


I have been there too
Blush
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7 posted 2003-11-27 05:55 AM


This was beautiful
Thanks for sharing this one
I posted one tonight too sorta new here
Do drop by and see me
Have a wonderful Thanksgiving
Blessings
Susan~~~

BloomingRose
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8 posted 2003-11-27 08:27 AM


Thank you all for wonderful comments.
Have a blessed holiday!

Deb

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In Your Poetic Mind
9 posted 2003-11-27 09:28 AM


In the desire of our mingling spirits''''
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I love the feeling this left me with....such beauty in these words...hugssss and Happy Day

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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