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titch k
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since 2003-11-25
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0 posted 2003-11-26 06:39 AM






I know little,
about my task in life
With twilight shadows
in my heart
And this spirit,
yearning in desire;
The song of angels,
rendering sweet succession;

For I am wearied,
mist the frost on the moon;
All our pampered paunches;
Lonliness, moonlit
sea and tears;
Which cannot summon,
in a solitary cloud;

This hollow in the heart,
roles in essence
And still, the struggle
of outpourings and distress;
My outward sense is gone;
And visions rise, less harassed,

Fetch me the key,
I put down my oar;
Only as heaven pleases
And this spirit,
yearning in desire;
The song of angels


Titch

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-11-26 06:46 AM


love the graphic, in both the picture and your words...breathing very visual feelings.
Enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2003-11-26 07:29 AM


Stunning writing and lovely graphics.  This had an incredible flow to it.  Well done.
Sparticus
Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245

3 posted 2003-11-26 08:28 AM


((((((Titch))))))  You continue to grow and grow as a writer.  The concepts here flow brilliantly with your message.  Welcome to the PIP!

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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