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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-26 06:33 AM

Only when the moon
pours between their
hollowed spaces, can you
hear their aching cries
to be heard, in the approach
of the most wicked of
seasons,

I stand with them, in stillness,
forsaken, with or without
a hint of moonlight,
as you have made me
weak, like none such other,

I would stand for you,
eternally, a shadow of the
girl i used to be,if only
to reunite with you just
one more time, on this
midnight's illumination of
the winter trees.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-26-2003 11:19 PM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-11-26 06:40 AM

beautifully written, expressed and felt from the heart

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-11-26 07:21 AM

I like this very much. It shows a side of you that you often hide, and it's a very beautiful side.

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-11-26 07:27 AM

This was so softly beautiful and I believe has just become one of my favorite of yours!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-11-26 07:45 AM

Such delicate thoughts woven here~
Beautiful ... just beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2003-11-26 10:22 PM

Is this ramblings from the edge.....if so, not bad!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-11-26 10:31 PM

so delicate...
Would have known you, even if I didn't know it was you.
TD

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-11-26 11:08 PM

I stand with them, in stillness,
forsaken, with or without
a hint of moonlight,
as you have made me
weak, like none such other

Hey you, I liked this alot and I miss you.
I'll write soon, once I get a grip!
Love ya girlielocks~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-11-26 11:17 PM

thanks for reading
and lori, yep me and the nakedgirl were going to send out a search party pretty soon
glad to see u girligirl

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

9 posted 2003-11-27 01:08 AM

Thank you for sharing this exquisite imagery with us.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

10 posted 2003-11-27 01:13 AM

if there was just a smilie for the word beuatiful thats is what i would put...beautiful write

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

11 posted 2003-11-27 01:47 AM

THIS is what poetry is made of. Good stuff here!

~~J

Blush
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 56
Ky

12 posted 2003-11-27 05:34 AM

This is beautiful
I haven't been by in some time
Thought I would drop by today
I loved this
And the tat on your arm
I got some old ones up somewhere lol
May post one today
Hope your Thanksgiving is a happy one
So nice to have you
Susan~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2003-11-28 04:41 PM

NIce...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2003-11-28 04:45 PM

I swear, I think my breath was frosting in
front of my face as I sat here...you paint
nicely....thanx.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-11-28 05:26 PM

Michele, I love the romantic way you write about trees.
It's so beautiful. Yes, you do paint beautiful
pictures with your words.

Hugs

Ethel

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

16 posted 2003-11-29 05:08 PM

thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, hope u all had a nice holiday

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

17 posted 2003-11-30 02:38 PM

inkedgoddess

I see strength and vulnerability in this...together they are beautiful.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

18 posted 2003-11-30 03:42 PM

ahh Michele . .

as Autumn leaves (LEFT), snow flies
the ground, covered in solitude and
you lie . . in wait . . . of the first
ray of sun . . smiling . . . only for you

I know and

beautiful writing
xxoo

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

19 posted 2003-11-30 05:06 PM

Touches deep. Lovely words.
Love,
Terri~

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