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Leah Caldwell New Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 4 |
I stare at your eyes... as they move rapidly A tear crys down the taste is acidly Your mouth opens for a gasp your teeth undo that clinching clasp I touched your face your skin like silk the color so pure As pure as milk I breathed in your air to inhale your soul For that briefe second my life felt whole My lips brushed up on yours As I closed my eyes I licked them softly And In seconds my heart dies Your neck is my palace Your hips give me light The vision is clear Its bleached insight |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Welcome to Passions Leah. I love your first post. Very well written...with just a touch of the erotic. Extremely nice read. Bravo and I hope you enjoy it here. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful first post! Welcome to Passions!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions Leah! Very nice first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Happy Thanksgiving America! ~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Leave it to you to bring me out of my hiding place.. I couldn't be more proud..or love you more..you are the reason I get up in the morning. Mom. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling so wide here. (and why do I feel proud of you?)  Welcome to Pip. A wonderful first post! And if ya think I'm crazy, just ask yer mom about me.  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Leah~ Welcome to Passions....this is such a soft, post....We are glad you are here, and hope you enjoy your time with us....Your talent runs in the family I see....(it's early, LOL I have only had one cup of coffee....took me a few minutes to grasp the last name...) please check your email for a special greeting Kindly~ Greeneyes~ ~~**~~ I had a dream last night you came to me on silver wings of light I flew away with you in painted sky Was it real Is it what you see,touch or feel [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-26-2003 09:27 AM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well done. Welcome to PiP!!! Enjoy. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoying this very much. Welcome to Passions! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! What a wonderfully creative first post, Leah. WELCOME!  |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Simply beautiful! So glad you decided to join us here. You're in good company. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice first post indeed!! Welcome to Passions! Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Nice, Really nice! Larry |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous and romantic debut, sweet Leah, Susan is such a wonderful poet and I am so happy you have brought more of this wonderful poetic family's grace here, yay, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Leah, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Leah, we all love you so much, and...Happy Thanksgiving to you and all your loved ones! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Leah, Lovely Margot |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonderfully done. I see talent runs in the family. Good to have you here |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Leah~ Very passionate entry into this circle of poetic friendships~ WELCOME~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow! What a great first write! Welcome aboard! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
we need to see more from you |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Dippity Doo-Dah Welcome!!! McLean |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful! We've got families here! Welcome to Passions, I'll enjoy your works as much as I enjoy your mother's, I'm sure! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Hi Leah, I'm sorry I'm so late welcoming you. I think that "late" is my middle name. LOL |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful first post Welcome Leah, I'm sure you'll love it here.  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Leah a touching write that made my heart drop an inch. Thank you. |
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