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Till I Met You

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C_ROK06
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0 posted 11-25-2003 08:50 PM       View Profile for C_ROK06   Email C_ROK06   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit C_ROK06's Home Page   View IP for C_ROK06

I try everyday,
To feel happy
To be accepted
To fit in,
But it never works
No matter how hard I try
The pain grows and grows with each moment that passes.
My unrest is unsettling
Making every stride harder
My grief is stronger
Than my will to go on
I canít continue feeling like this
Iím falling farther and farther into this pit
Everything is growing darker
Iím consumed with my rage
My hatred
My hurt
My feelings
Have gone astray
The feeling grows and grows
Tearing at my soul
I cry out in anguish
Because no one knows
How I feel
I can never explain to them
How I got here
They wouldnít understand
They could never help
They never could figure me out
Even with my help
Those where my feelings
Till I met you
And now
I can begin anew

[This message has been edited by C_ROK06 (11-25-2003 08:51 PM).]

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icequeen
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1 posted 11-25-2003 09:54 PM       View Profile for icequeen   Email icequeen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for icequeen

I am glad you have found someone you can trust, who gives you the desire to start fresh. It is a rare opportunity, and you are lucky.... Happy Thanksgiving to you.

Caroline

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

SharaRose
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since 07-19-2003
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Somewhere out there~


2 posted 11-25-2003 10:43 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Good for you!!! I loved the way this ended so hopeful. Lovely.
Love,
Terri~;butterfly:
JamesMichael
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3 posted 09-18-2004 01:24 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovely...James
 
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