A parting of the waves - a quatrain

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2003-11-25 07:57 PM

This parting is such sorrow
My tears flow with despair
I know that come the morrow
This comb parts much less hair

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2003-11-25 07:58 PM

Keth,
May my nightmare never come true!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-11-25 08:02 PM

rofl
go get some rogaine!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.
(Blink, Breathe, Stand, Fight)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-11-25 08:15 PM

I think I wrote this a long time ago??
Keth, did you borrow this from me...???

ROTFLMBO!! I know you didn't, BUT, you
could have....so close to true for me..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-11-25 08:30 PM

Kethry~
A marvelous form for this plight~

WONDERFULLY DONE~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2003-11-26 09:40 AM

ROFLMAO... I love this! *G*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-11-26 09:46 AM

Kethry,
Clever,

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-11-26 10:48 AM

cute and happy, thanks for the smile

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2003-11-28 07:15 AM

Beloved one, I’m laughing fit to bust a corset, and you KNOW how I hate busting anything. Is this fair beloved to write so well when YOU know I can never manage a little quatrain, well a little anything really.

Exquisite beloved one absolutely exquisite, you KNOW I LOVE IT UTTERLY

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

9 posted 2003-11-28 08:26 AM

Kethry...

Extremely witty! LOL Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2003-11-28 08:36 AM

Keth , I love your humour !in this !!
Hope

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

11 posted 2003-11-28 08:45 AM

Very clever writing!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

12 posted 2003-11-28 02:34 PM

Kethry,

Very cute... It made me chuckle.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

13 posted 2003-11-30 07:00 PM

Picture me with my hands together giving a little Chinese bow-I acknowledge the master wit!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

14 posted 2003-11-30 07:06 PM

:-) how cute! A fun read.
pictureme :-)

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