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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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0 posted 2003-11-25 06:48 PM

Words in wool clothing
impressing an audience
come from an other

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (11-25-2003 07:00 PM).]

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2003-11-25 08:25 PM

This is different Sadie. I like it.
:-)

I could use some warm wool for its cold here :-(

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-11-25 08:37 PM

Sadelite~

Nice tight little Senryu format for these thoughts~
Very nicely done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2003-11-25 08:39 PM

froggy,
You're right! It is different, but then, so am I! I was driving down the road and trying to think in words other than my own, when I realized I was being the wolf in sheep's clothing! So from that, words in wool's clothing was derived... Glad it was of interest...

Sadelite
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Posts 2519

4 posted 2003-11-25 08:42 PM

Marge,
   Thanks!  I've been wondering what a senryu
is!   I appreciate your comment!
                              Sadelite

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

5 posted 2003-11-25 08:55 PM

This is excellent - perfect form and thought-provoking. I love it

Caroline

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2003-11-25 09:02 PM

icequeen,
Thanks a bundle, but I'm still not sure what perfect form is... What is the difference between a senryu and haiku?
Sadelite

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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7 posted 2003-12-16 07:21 PM

Finally, I got to read it. Great!

Ratleader

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8 posted 2003-12-18 10:33 PM

Biggest difference is, Haiku always has nature imagery and talks about existence....and it usually has a change, some realization shown by new or flowing imagery. Senryu may or may not have a nature theme, and it talks about people or human nature.

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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2003-12-19 06:39 AM

Thanks RatL,
That helps a lot.
Sadelite

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-20-2003 10:34 AM).]

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