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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-11-25 05:32 PM


As Days Passed By

She whispered from across
the room the tender words
I wanted to hear.
The words were faint
at that time but soon
they would become
crystal clear.
As days passed by
we grew closer.
We knew what it
was like to care.
Whispers progressed into
intimate conversations.
Hearts to caress and
kisses to be shared.

JamesLee
November23
2003

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1 posted 2003-11-25 06:11 PM


Very lovely...very romantic James!
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Magnus
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2 posted 2003-11-25 09:31 PM


Very nicely said JM...good job.
SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-11-25 11:10 PM


Very sweet..those times you can recall that brought you to each other. Nice.
Love,
Terri~

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4 posted 2003-11-26 12:21 PM


Nice presentation of love's progression.
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-11-26 03:34 AM


nice
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6 posted 2003-11-28 11:37 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I always love hearing of your happy words of love and I wish for more days to pass and this love only grows stronger! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Margherita
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7 posted 2003-11-29 11:06 AM


Sweet and promising.
Love, Margherita

Hockeychick19
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8 posted 2003-11-29 11:29 AM


James,

I love this, it's soooo sweet.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

jaicie114
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9 posted 2003-11-29 06:18 PM


JamesMichael...

What an absolutely wonderful way to tell a love story...thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-01-27 11:51 PM


I thank each one of you for the lovely responses....James
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