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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
I watched an old lobo wolf one day at the zoo. Pacing restlessly back and forth. His eyes filled with not really knowing exactly what to do. The bars, you could tell, was getting in his way. Pacing, just pacing around, in that big iron clad cage. Our eyes met briefly and sorrow, for that moment, clung to sorrow. Both realizing, confinement comes in various sizes and shapes of iron cages and each soul must come to terms all on their own. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gina~ This scene is painted very well in your words~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
an interesting thought in this poem.  "sorrow met sorrow" I love that part, and the ending is just wonderful. Here is a boost for you. All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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dr_jones Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 16Michigan |
Great imagery, and very strong message in this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this (sigh) |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Thank you all so much for your honest words, and kindness, Marge T., Temptress,dr. Jones,and Passing Shadows. |
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