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Gina Culliney
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since 2003-03-08
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0 posted 2003-11-25 04:08 PM


Nothing but darkness...
Nothing left of good or light.

So the darkness sadly prevails,
turning mere living into a fragmented
hell.

Once there was a time of innocence,
of good, of beauty fair, and of light.

A rare time when youth gave justice to
its purest insight.

But wisdom beyond my years and the hard
knock experiences, gave way to such tender
youthfullness.

And ah, the golden glory of beauty fair and
light wrapped entirely in stolen innocences
is what this scarred old heart shall always
miss.

© Copyright 2003 Gina Culliney - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-11-25 04:19 PM


I really liked this piece of beautiful poetry.

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-11-25 05:27 PM


Nice writing...those looking for beauty will find it...James
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
3 posted 2003-11-25 10:51 PM


This one describes life so well. We always miss that lost innocence.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-11-25 11:02 PM



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-26 03:48 AM


this reminds me of something I would write....I love this
Gina Culliney
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since 2003-03-08
Posts 170

6 posted 2003-12-04 05:38 PM


I am honored by your words thank you all so much, The loner23, Thundermage,JamesMichael,
Shararose, and Passing Shadows.

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