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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2003-11-25 02:22 PM


Blessing in the Skies

I visit with the man in the moon,
as I hear your whispers, oh so near.
Wishing, that tomorrow your kisses I'd feel
yet, you've flown through that celestial field.

You're my blessing in the skies
a treasure to my open eyes
glistening the stars that shine
within your love I'll always climb

One day I will exist with you soon,
I won't fear, for your love, will endear.
Knowing, that in heaven my heartaches will heal
as, your arms around me feel so surreal.

You're my blessing in the skies
a treasure to my open eyes
glistening the stars that shine
within your love I'll always climb

I visit with the man in the moon,
as my tears silence this frothy beer.
Promising me, that you're close enough to steal
yet, you've flown through that celestial field.

You're my blessing in the skies
a treasure to my open eyes
glistening the stars that shine
within your love I'll always climb

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-11-25 02:23 PM


This is a real beautiful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-25 02:25 PM


well done
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3 posted 2003-11-26 12:52 PM


This is a very beautiful poem and timely too as it can help us to remember our loved ones during the Holidays.
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4 posted 2003-11-28 11:35 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Ria, I miss your gorgeous poetry sooooooo much, sweet friend, I hope all is well with you and Dawn and Kevin, yay, God Bless You All and I hope you had the most happiest Thanksgiving, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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5 posted 2003-11-29 01:30 PM


reads just like a song...nicely done
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