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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-11-25 12:24 PM


Tales of the long forgotton
awaken the fire within me
burning away the dross
of my despair
nudging me toward
love's quiet whisper.

As I enter her arms
I am renewed
pain disapears
like the shackles of a slave
who has been given his freedom.

I run toward the unknown
for love has taken
my fears away.

As I gaze into her eyes
I know that she is
the one
that I was destined to hold
for all eternity.
Love who held
my hand
Now holds our hands
together
as we step into the future
not two souls but one.


[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (11-25-2003 12:25 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-25 12:48 PM


Brad, m'friend, love looks good on you
Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-25 12:50 PM


thank you
Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 2003-11-26 12:08 PM


Very nicely written. I enjoyed

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-11-26 12:10 PM


How romantic

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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5 posted 2003-11-26 12:12 PM


Gotta love poems like this.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

WildPoet
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6 posted 2003-11-26 03:05 AM


Your work is always full of feeling!

WildPoet

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-11-26 05:12 PM


Nice...James
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8 posted 2003-11-26 05:24 PM


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I run toward the unknown
for love has taken
my fears away.
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yep, love seems to agree with you

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