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A place I love to be

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Member Patricius
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0 posted 11-25-2003 07:40 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LeeJ

At a resturant by the bay
I was confronted by shifting
Geometrical patterns
In shades of what might be
Seen through a kaleidoscope
Breath-taking three demensional designs
While sail boats rocked back and forth sleepily,
On a blossoming sense of moist laping motion,
Infinately strange, yet a familiar sea
Reading, and eating on a redwood veranda
in Eleuthera where the...
Light of night lay low and warm
Impressive sea of stars gleaming overhead
Expired day, lay buried in the ground
Air remained see-through & humid
Combed by a solitary wind
Plaited with many breezes
Stealthy atmospheric tunes filtered sensuous
Premeditated socializing nutrients
In a quiet way..Thoughts of night spiraled
Cinematic flames, collaborating great orange tongues
With somber green reminiscent of things beating
Truth in my sociable fascination
From an expressive artistís eye
Misting fleshy, exercising descriptive potential
I felt sea currents locking pieces of its chant
Deep into my leveled day, capturing evidence
Oh how
Hope and intense work, enchants everything
Through attentive rose colored lenses
Coupled with expressions of surprise
Subtle qualities for the listening
Inaudibly commiserating a hearty source
Like a white colored handkerchief matching expression
With a supernatural clairvoyance
Trussing passive destiny
Like flashing halos positive, unquestioning
Youthful and effortlessly misled
There transforming magically into doves
Soaking about acts of kindness
Sensible cultural elites
Celebrating an individual level
Hour by hour, where all traffic goes
Inside manís remarkable essence
And me, standing there, droning out lifeís voice
As if together we had been drinking
Overpowered by this unknown substance, reality
By the radiance of the moon..Deeply moving
Transforming a stranger into a truth of what messages become
With precious authoritative colors
Sent to what we might become
Emboldened by this fund, herbing attention
To endless weaving anesthetic dizziness
Time climbs to unison
Like synonyms eager to cross a threshold
Of self-imposed awnings fossilized into eternal love
There I was, in reality, and there to, shall I be again
Soon...where sound swells the sea, into layered personalities
Painted pommels arranged with care all for humankind
Embodiments of elaborate etched design
Absorbing vivid details, the natural skills of Natureís Mind
There I am alive tossed into a stained glass portrait

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1 posted 11-25-2003 12:22 PM       View Profile for Jes   Email Jes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jes

Break it break the glas and get out.

Were you feel the air of life floating and breath it in and let it tell you the words of how life can smell.

Live it.



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2 posted 11-25-2003 12:27 PM       View Profile for Bonnie j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bonnie j

The first thing that came to mind was a colorful piece of stained glass reflecting life and her beauty.
Hi kiddo guess who your buddy is?
The Chocolate Monster.Someone mentioned Chocolate and the Monster hit the internet at PIP.
See Ya Sis
Love Me. LOL
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3 posted 11-25-2003 12:35 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

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4 posted 11-25-2003 12:56 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

You paint your words like the paintings of pointalism. When you view it from a distance it makes a grand picture.

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5 posted 09-04-2004 12:32 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

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