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Alone and Forgotten |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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She sits by the window in her little room And wonders how this came to be Alone, and forgotten by the one that she loves With no one to care, or to see... She left all she knew to fly into his arms To a land that was strange and so cold Not knowing that she would be naught but a slave And her dreams would be soon growing old... The one that she loved so betrayed her in deeds She discovered what was meant not to see Now he's taken away any kindness or hope And replaced it with futility... It's hard to be left to the silence and fears Yet harder to lose what you shared Alone and forgotten, is that all there is What I'd give for just one friend who cared... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 gawd! this is sad! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
 this hurts...it aches. It is beautiful, but.. its just so sad... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i hope this is just a poem...hugs sunny...h |
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Mary Ann Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 111 |
this is very sad and moving....beautifully written but very painful ... God bless, MA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you all, but it's true...your friendship is appreciated at this time...~S~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
very sad write...but with that sadness I honestly do believe will come strength and healing. you have many friends here--do not forget that during this hard time! take care. amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
such a sad piece |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, this hurts! The pain of loneliness can be worse than the pain of broken bones, because those will knit on their own, while The Big Lonely can go on and on.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
well, I am only an email away hope you forgive me for my last name (Stafford) an aching write, from one who has been so brilliantly sunny, until lately |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my twin... I would wish this was not your plight... and wish a friend there for you... but never forget we're here. I hurt so for you... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSunnyOne~ This is NOT what I wanted to read, any more than it's what you wanted to write~ 'What I'd give for just one friend who cared...' You have friends among us ... take our hands~ Write me ANYTIME !! noles1@totcon.com *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Sunny, I am so sorry.I'm here for you, too, sweet friend. You know my e-mail. I was hoping when I read this that it was just a poem... then I read your reply to someone above. Please don't forget that you have many, many friends here, Sunny. We all love you. You are just precious. With love and hugs, Ethel Here's another of my e-mails I've just gotten......... ethel_gg@msn.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sorry to read of this situation...you'll make it through...look to your strength...and look for true friends...in some of my darkest moments I met new friends that were there for me...praying for you...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sunnyone, I read so much pain in this. I hope you are okay. I am a friend, who cares. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny I don't know what quite to say except I think you have more friends than you know. We are all here praying for you, and my doors are always open for you. Ariana |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you all.....very much.....when I need friends, I know that I can come here, and that's my lifeline right now.....love you all very much....~S~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sunny, we are here for you, and I can only but offer a shoulder, but I am always here if ya need. Hugs to you sweet lady. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know where I live...   |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sunny...i am STILL here...helen you may feel alone but you are NOT forgotten [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-26-2003 11:46 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sunny, this is very sad...wishing you a wealth of friendship....there are many here above me who care for you a great deal...sending hugs and good will your way...God bless you with strength each and every day. Luv Lee J. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The one that she loved so betrayed her in deeds She discovered what was meant not to see Now he's taken away any kindness or hope And replaced it with futility... I felt every syllable M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This I know~ I tell you Sunnyone, I have done a lot of soul searching lately, and have come away with the fact that I can't let my sadness get bigger than I am, that's just too big of a price to pay. Hugs to you sweet poetess~ Loved your poem! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Your poem is achingly powerful and obviously born from a broken heart. Remember, for every rogue there is a prince, a salve for every burn, a mountain for every valley. Make God grant you now your mountain of hope. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I too, was hoping that this was simply superb poetry and not a true reflection of your own life. When our world turns upside down, it is difficult to ever picture it right side up again. I have so much compassion for the painful situation that you find yourself in, but perhaps all has occurred to effect the changes that need to be made to bring the sun back into your life. Catalysts are not always rosy things in one's life, but they can get the ball rolling us in a direction that can bring the joy back into it! Loving, healing hugs, Linda You have many friends among us here at Pip! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
You are all so very precious to me right now, and I no longer feel so 'alone'. I don't believe in airing personal pain as a whole, but I needed to reach out, just to survive, and there were so many hands holding mine, that I knew I could gather strength from them, and from you. Thank you all very much, and today is a new day, a day of Thanksgiving, and one that I will share with you in thoughts...... Now will someone please send me a piece of pumpkin pie, as these Brits don't know how to make one!!!! Life goes on, and so do I, because of my many wonderful friends here... Sunny Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (11-27-2003 03:10 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sunnyone, I'm so sorry to hear you're feeling this way, sweet friend, you are NEVER alone here as me and so many other friends here love you so very much for one and I have to be honest...you are one of my best friends here on Passions, and I am so blessed to have you around as you bring smiles to all our hearts! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you can always talk to me if you need a shoulder to lean on, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oooohhhhhhh...and here's an angel pumpkin pie just for you by the way, yay!  Love you, angel friend! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-27-2003 05:24 PM).] |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Sunnyone, So sad but I think you have lots of friendswho care. It doesn't help when the hurt closes in but they are there. Margot |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I must say, I did so hope that this was not a reflection of your life. I am so sorry for your pain. On a personal note, there were many lines in this verse that I once knew very well. I have been out of the relationship (marriage) for two years now, and I have never felt stronger. That is my prayer for you. May He grant you that same strength. Please remember, time is a wonderful healer. Thinking of you this Thanksgiving evening. Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I dont know you like some of the poeple who have replied before me, but i am here too. I really loved your poem, and i hope everything gets better in time, wich it will. ~kissa~ |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Sunnyone, This ripped right through me... I hope things change for the better. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
People that are friends will love you no matter whether they approve of your choices, or not. They are there to pick you up, and boost you back on your feet. Approving only means they are putting their opinion of what you should do ahead of you yourself. If anyone turns away from you for the choice you made to be with this person then they value their opinion more than they value you. Look for people that are real with you. Sending hugs. Look to the Lord for your healing, and he will send the right people in your path. If this is not about you then it still stands for the person you know, and this is about. Blessings I pray come your way, so many you can't count them, because they overflow!!!  Love, Terri~  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
not forgotten, no...hang in there |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Once again, I want you all to know that even if we don't all know each other well, we're still family, and I feel blessed to have your understanding, especially today...it was to be my first wedding anniversary. Thank you for helping me through the day.......~S~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (11-28-2003 10:03 AM).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetSweetSunnyOne, your poem moved me beyond words can express... One thing for certain, though we are afar in distance, I've got a special place in my heart for a sweetFriend such as you are... I'm bumping this poem back2the top and shall keep this thread in my library... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I miss you, my sweet friend. Hugs to you, sweet lady  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - I don't know what to think about what I'm reading in this write. A friend once, still a friend, send me an email... BC |
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