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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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Wyoming

0 posted 2003-11-25 01:57 AM


Whispering winds invite me
To visit those dreams tucked away.
Images dance across my mind
As I walked with you today.

It's been so long since you've been gone.
You held my hand; I felt you near.
I'd traveled so many empty miles
Wiped away so many tears.

Now putting the sadness aside
In reflections of another time.
Hearing the laughter we once shared,
If only time could rewind.

Draining my mind of emotion.
From inspiration I now write.
Words of image etched in gold
Perhaps these words will ignite.

Within this heart of a poet
Treasured dreams and thoughts flow through.
Visions written on parchment
With loving thoughts of you.

© Copyright 2003 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2003-11-25 02:27 AM


sweet

I miss someone like this sometimes.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-11-25 02:38 AM


Eloise~
SO GOOD TO SEE YOU~

This is just a gorgeous read~

Happy holidays to you and yours, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-25 03:11 AM


just wonderful!
Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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4 posted 2003-11-25 06:41 PM


Thanks Temptress, Marge and passing shadows.  I appreciate you stopping by and reading.  
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-12-08 11:20 PM


Enjoyed...James
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