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martiniat8
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0 posted 2003-11-21 01:22 PM


he lay on the bed next to her, rubbing his hand over her soft pale flat tummy exposed by her fuzzy baby blue half top. he could almost feel her cramping as he smoothly caressed under her belly button, softly kissing it, laying his head gently there, whispering, "I Love You" and drifted off to sleep...

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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-11-24 10:07 PM


lovely....

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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2 posted 2003-11-24 10:58 PM


You captured a sweet moment, and the movement of action and feeling within it. That's good poetry.....

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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-11-26 05:08 PM


Nice...James
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