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martiniat8
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0 posted 2003-11-21 01:24 PM


I feel I am dieing
as I tremble
shaking
and Im crying
silently
as my eye weeps uncontrolably
and I know not why

Silence surrounds and I wiah for her healing hands
a gentle spirit with just a caress would save me

memories of being covered up on the couch
she blanketed me
snd I felt warm
but that was long before this storm

I feel I am dieing
wishing for healing hands
that are silent...

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1 posted 2003-11-24 10:07 PM


I know how this feels....nicely said

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

steavenr
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2 posted 2003-12-10 08:56 PM


Reminds me of a saying I heard a long time ago. "No one would ever give up on life if they knew they had one friend who really cared."

I guess the old saying is true:

No one really cares how much you know until they know how much you care.

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