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Just Below Coma
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Just Below Coma |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Arrogance, lies, and pretense of pleasure Drowning secrets, burying treasure Granting my personal authority To those who claim to own a piece of me What do they see in this dead end thread Of existence, just below coma The Boss and His angels were out on patrol Protecting, serving, trying to gain control Of the ills and woes of many of those Who were lost and staggering Trying to find home Out there, just below coma He shined His light into my unfortunate nest He said he had come to grant me a rest When the truth was revealed I began to heal From the darkness Just below coma. [This message has been edited by Kahlil (11-25-2003 08:19 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kahlil, with following of the news here, this is a very timely write... well done. Very well done. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Karilea, I am honored at your reply. ~K~ |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Excellent write! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you so much, M.I.! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, by this write of Light, I'd definitely say you are healing and coming out from "Just Below Coma". ~ and that's a very good thing to see, my friend!  ~ May you be bathed in healing Light!  EA |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Everything is so much better now, thank you Linda, my friend, for shining on... ~K~ |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Spiritually uplifting,I'm not sure of the circumstances that inspired it but know it inspired me. Live like it's your last day... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is outstanding! I mean that! You deserve many more words then I can describe here! Sincerely, Sauni. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
bbent: "spiritually uplifting" that is quite and honor, and I'm humbled, thank you. sauni: I've missed you! Thanks for your generous comments! ~K~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Kahlil, I had to read this twice, and think I'll catch it again tomorrow when I'm more refreshed! Very, very good... Sadelite |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you, Sadelite, I hope I've inspired a few thoughts. ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for sharing |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am so pleased that I didnt miss this. There is such strength of spirit in this write, very well done. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you, Dixie. Gentle Spirit, a renewed strength of spirit is exactly what I'm experiencing. I'm happy that it came out in the writing. Thanks. ~K~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
To those who claim to own a piece of me What do they see in this dead end thread Of existence, just below coma have wondered the same at times..but it's really a cherished treasure to know that they love us as best they know. Wonderfully written |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I agree, LeeJ. And sometimes we have to make sure we're not giving ourselves away to the extent that we are "just" dead-end threads. Thanks for your comments. ~K~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kahlil, you are blessed, but I believe you already know that. Thanks for sharing. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Iliana, Yes, you're right, I do know that. Bless you for reading and commenting. ~K~ |
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