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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-11-24 08:05 PM

From balmy Indian summer breeze
The wind expounds sub zero freeze
And brings to light on shades of gray
The first of winters dances play

In cotton swirl these flakes of white
That gathers softly new and light
A dry set coat of fine grain snow
About the towns in blankets grow

Such acrobatics fill the air
In tiny shapes petite and fair
And dancers all upon the fall
Beginning ends a season’s call

Copyright Kkh 11/24/03

PseudoPoet
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since 2003-11-23

Posts 18

1 posted 2003-11-24 08:10 PM

Beautifully written.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-11-24 08:16 PM

an enjoyable welcome song to the new season

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-11-24 11:08 PM

You captured the transition, and beautifully so....

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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

4 posted 2003-11-25 12:19 PM

What perfect timing for a beautifully written piece. About 8 inches of this white stuff is lying around tonight. Enjoyed the read.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-11-25 04:17 AM

Enchanting write!
Love, Margherita

ice
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since 2003-05-17

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Pennsylvania

6 posted 2003-11-25 07:30 AM

Very nice seasonal poem, enjoyed reading it..:-)

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-11-25 07:52 AM

In cotton swirl these flakes of white
That gathers softly new and light
A dry set coat of fine grain snow
About the towns in blankets grow

hmmmm, this beautiful poem actually makes me want to enjoy winter....lovely

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-11-25 09:15 AM

Kathleen~
Your poetic thoughts as soft as the first falling snow~

'Such acrobatics fill the air
In tiny shapes petite and fair'

Yes, they do, don't they ?

LOVELY PENNING~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-11-25 09:17 AM

Aye, one man's beginning...
is another man's end...
so it is with seasons,
everlasting,
ever evolving...

Change is good.

Beautiful thoughts here, Kathleen!

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

10 posted 2003-11-25 10:51 AM

The corps de ballet create an intricut ballet of beauty in delicate flakes of white lace.
Lovely
Bon-Bon

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-11-25 01:02 PM

this is just like a song....light and soft

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2003-11-25 02:06 PM

This was wonderful! Snow does in fact create the nicest ballet doesn't it?

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2003-11-25 07:49 PM

A little snow on the northern slopes?
Beautiful pictures you paint here, thanx
K.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

14 posted 2003-11-25 08:39 PM

Kathleen, this is a delightfully calm and beautiful write. If only life could be this easily transitioned.

Hugs, Marti

'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.'
PEACE!!!
Indira Gandhi

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