navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #30 » Imagine This
Open Poetry #30
Post A Reply Post New Topic Imagine This Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Robert Frazier
Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014


0 posted 2003-11-24 06:19 PM


If I imagine you the moon tonight,
would you meet me, shadowed, in the clear?
And if the wind were to borrow
from your very breath, would you
whisper some sweet secrets in my ear?
I've imagined this, often, and a thousand times
Like a heathen, I would dance a thousand more.
But before your shadows keep me, this I must confess  
I wish the sun to slumber, all the more.


© Copyright 2003 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2003-11-24 06:31 PM


This was breathtakingly beautiful Robert.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-11-24 06:33 PM


Come closer..if I whisper will you listen?
Beautiful Robert.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Greeneyes
Deputy Moderator 50 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2003-11-24 09:53 PM


this is a timeless gift....you have written this beautifully...


Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
4 posted 2003-11-25 01:38 AM


Jealous here, wishing I'd thought of this!



~~J

Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
5 posted 2003-11-25 01:52 AM


"I wish the sun to slumber, all the more"

I've never been able to say it like this and never heard it said like this.

lovely

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2003-11-25 02:17 AM


I would
suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
7 posted 2003-11-25 01:25 PM


I like this very much! *S* Excellent!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #30 » Imagine This

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary