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Lying Side By Side
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Lying Side By Side |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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+*+*+*+*+ Lying here, side by side, With our spirits face to face, We breathe each other's essence in, Transcending time and place. Our eyes, they are the windows, To our souls and ancient past, As we gaze within their depths, We find answers to questions asked. Without our bodies touching, We are closer than two can be, First joined through our spirits, Then through love physically. Lying here, side by side, With our spirits face to face, We breathe each other's essence in, Transcending time and place. +*+*+*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-24-2003 02:06 PM).] |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"Lying here, side by side, With our spirits face to face, We breathe each other's essence, Transcending time and place" loved this stanza and loved the whole poem "So what befalls the flawless? |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Linda, Well written... enjoyed.  ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
We are closer than two can be, First joined through our spirits, Then through love physically. Lying here, side by side, With our spirits face to face, We breathe each other's essence in, Transcending time and place. *me smiling brightly here* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm tucking this one into my library to enjoy time and time again... Beautiful work! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is beautiful.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful Linda! Enjoyed the warmth on this cold Monday afternoon. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
eor ~ Are you, by any chance, a friend of Winnie the Pooh?!? lol  I appreciate your response to my poem!  EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kelly ~ "angel" curtseying! lol  Thank you! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ I can see your dazzling smile all the way from up here in Ontario! I knew that you would like this one, Ethel Mae! lol Huggums, Linda Lou |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern ~ Whenever someone deems a poem of mine a "keeper", I feel the same way as I did back in school when I'd get an A+ on a term paper! lol Thanks for the A+, Dear Belle from the South! Lovin' hugs & spoonfuls of happiness, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
skyshine ~ It pleases me that you think so! Thanks, Elizabeth for stopping by and writing such a nice comment! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ Oh, yes! A wonderful way to keep warm on a cold day such as this! From Brrrrrr to Puuuuurrrrrr! Waving to you from here! Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I too dream so much of getting to stare into my dream girls eyes and see tears of joy and cosmos reflect! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Linda, Now you have to be an Angel to make love like that. Love it. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Linda I will agree with the others - you must be an angel and I will tuck this away in my library. Love it. Ariana |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Your poetry gets better all the time! Deb |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
our spirits face to face that is beautfiul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ I wish that for you as well, my dear friend! ~ May you and the girl in your dreams, find each other in reality! ~ and soon! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ It takes one to know one, Dear Angel Man! You are soooooo special! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ariana ~ I just love your name! It is so melodic and with a hint of mystery! It pleases me greatly that you have saved my poem to your library! That is quite a compliment indeed! Thank you! Warm hugs & smiles, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BloomingRose ~ Hi, Deb! Good to see you again! I appreciate your comment! It is both satisfying and motivating! Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ Thanks, Dixie! That was my favorite part of the poem as well! This poem practically wrote itself. It just flowed from my soul! Happy hugs, Linda |
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