Who am i -----> Or who am i not ! ( nearby drunk )

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Open Poetry #30

Who am i -----> Or who am i not ! ( nearby drunk )

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

0 posted 2003-11-24 01:25 PM

Am i here or am i there ----> Please save for mee a prayr.
I dont know how to spell ----> But please dont tell.
im a friend of hearts ----> And still my words are of arts.
But who am i that i want to live ----> So please why cant no one ever forgive.
I am mee ----> Is taht what you all see.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ----> But were can i goooo.
Someone come and catch mee ----> I want to pass and go the way i feel free.
But still i have a life ----> God why am i still alive.
I love the hearts ----> for all it becomes arts.
But were am I ----> My life could be such a sighhhhh.

This was one of my bad days but wery thoughtfull, and i have to say the dreams i had behind told another story that what i have smile.

The fairy tale and the end ----> hehhehehe that one we cant bend.

Smile or tears falling dont know ----> but were tell life me to go.

Jes

[This message has been edited by Jes (11-24-2003 01:39 PM).]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-11-24 03:18 PM

Intresting form

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

2 posted 2003-11-25 12:25 PM

Smile

Thanks Brad Majors

Jes

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

3 posted 2003-11-25 02:45 PM

Interesting poem.
Don't worry I don't spell to great at times. I mix up my to too's and my know no's, my then and than even when I say them I'm not sure. Dah.....
Keep on sharing.
Se Ya Bon-Bon

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-11-25 03:14 PM

hmmmm, well, let me tell you, not only don't I know how to spell, can't type either, and don't ask me what I had for lunch, cause unless I write it down, I'll never remember...enjoyed this, keep em coming.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-11-25 03:42 PM

Interesting poem. But I still liked it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

6 posted 2003-11-26 01:15 AM

Smile

Thanks all

and yes i will let them run.

Smile

Jes

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