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eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

0 posted 2003-11-24 01:23 PM

My Soul

My soul feels thin-
          Thins as a wet piece of paper
                    Floating in a lake in California.
          Being whisked up by the wind,
Carried over and through the currents,

And dropped off in New York,
          To be stepped on.  Imprinted on
                    By the million people walking above.
          This love shall prove
To be the strongest if my soul

Can survive.

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

PseudoPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-11-23

Posts 18

1 posted 2003-11-24 01:31 PM

Indeed, continue though weakened.

Kazm
Member

since 2003-11-13

Posts 99

2 posted 2003-11-24 03:16 PM

I have been to both of those places and I wouldn't want to be soaked or stepped on in either one of them.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-11-24 10:50 PM

Your soul may feel thin, but your poem feels deep.

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Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

4 posted 2003-11-25 12:33 PM

Must be a strong soul.

Smile

Jes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-11-26 02:18 PM

ahh Matt a true test of time indeed
beautiful writing
xxoo

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

6 posted 2003-11-26 03:31 PM

so enjoyed this reflection
how mighty the soul in life's chaos
and you summed this up beautifully
love Titch

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

7 posted 2003-11-27 01:04 AM

thank you all for your replies sorry i didnt get back sooner been dealing wiht some things, but thank you all!

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2003-11-27 09:09 PM

Hi Matt

I really enjoyed this.....your words spoke volumes.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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