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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-11-24 12:53 PM


Seasons of Love

April was a good month to meet.
She was primed and ready.
She was soft and sweet.

May I, shall I kiss her soft and tender lips.
Would I, could I live without her kiss.

June, do not forsake me.
Why do you carry my dreams far away.
The seeds planted in April,
blossomed into love by May.

July it's not that I don't like you.
But I prefer Love close to me,
not far away across a silky sea.

In August, Love what will I do without you.
Though far away my love is true.

Come September she will be back in my arms.
A deep ocean can not keep me from her charms.

In October my dreams all came true, in soft
and tender moments I fell in love with you.

November I like you the best for love flows
freely through arms that hold and caress.
Seasons they come and they go and in her
arms my love contines to grow.

JamesLee
November23
2003




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Snow
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1 posted 2003-11-24 01:44 AM


a tender sweet write..
i enjoyed this :-D
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


ambrish
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2 posted 2003-11-24 05:16 AM


Seasons they come and they go and in her
arms my love contines to grow.
         true the season of love is forever.


Gina Culliney
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3 posted 2003-11-25 03:47 PM


Touching and very softly written.  Well done.
the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-11-25 03:53 PM


This is so romantic.

Cold hands means a warm heart

titch k
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5 posted 2003-11-25 04:40 PM


OH YES...SMILE
and i do look forward to reading you

these lines jumped out at me..thankyou

But I prefer Love close to me,
not far away across a silky sea.

love Titch

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6 posted 2003-11-25 04:55 PM


Beautiful James.  hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-11-25 05:09 PM


James, I love this.
Hugs  
Ethel

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-11-25 05:09 PM


Thank you Snow, ambrish, Gina, the loner, titch and Nightshade for the nice responses...James
ThunderMage
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9 posted 2003-11-25 10:53 PM


Definitely a good write.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-11-26 05:04 PM


Thank you Thundermage for the nice response...James
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