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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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and here... within this esoteric existance a dance of nudity free... as a smile flashed across the pandemonium of time... can you hear it? the barking...BARKING of the clock in kaleidoscope of too long muted cries ANNOUNCING... 'twas the eggs, came first ~Vicky L. Raynes When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-23-2003 10:27 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....with the chickens inside ....if the chickens had come first, the eggs were inside... so either way it was a tie.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (11-23-2003 09:35 PM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Now we finally know!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this question drives me wild...I can't ever keep it straight.  Love it! Hugs~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
LOL not at all what I expected....I love that! hugssss Lauren~ I had a dream last night |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Funny! Laughter is good in poetry. There isn't enough of it. Kaz |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
giggle, yes, the eggs came first. and mine were fried.  loved this you!  |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*grins* you're nuts, lady  Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
So, that's why the chicken crossed the road? Oh sorry...I'm confused...lol. This made me chuckle Vicky. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Varuch Elohim Junior Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 41Italy |
WOW...great work. Well expressed and deep. Varuch Elohim |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Ah, wit in poetry -- I'll take it! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... not what I expected, but I certainly enjoyed! *S* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I'll bet they were turkey eggs...right? LOL always a pleasure reading you. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Good to see you Vicky~ Love your write~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a mnost enjoyable poem straight from your golden heart, yay! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Vicky, It's good to see you, lady. Sorry I missed this before now. It was a delight to read! Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... Such a great ending ... a revalation! I love the way your mind works, Vicky! Much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Ok, so I've been slightly remiss. Will you forgive me if I say that I love it? Because I do... *BUGS* Kielo |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...I enjoyed this so much, my friend. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i get it, it was the egg that came first so sweet |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
One of the world's greatest debates...which came first....and that BARKING clock got me too...excellent poem Vicky...loved it... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wow...you all are so good to me. Thank you... Ed...thanks for reading and commenting Elizabeth...yes we do! Thank you, my friend Nancy...lol...thanks much, my friend. Hugs back! Lauren...thank you..glad you enjoyed. Hugs Kazm...glad you enjoyed this..thanks Karen?...lmao...isn't that better than over easy?..grin SO good to see you...glad this gave you a giggle. Love you much, lady... Rhonda...why, thank you!..grin Chris...lol...glad this gave you a chuckle, my friend. Thanks so much for reading. Hugs back at'cha. Varuch...thank you James...thank you much...glad you like it. Ruth...glad you enjoyed, my friend. Thank you. Titia...of course they were! LOL Good to see you, my friend. Love and hugs to you. Marge...thank you. Glad you enjoyed this one. Hugs Noah...you are always so kind..thank you Ethel...good to see you too, my friend. Glad you enjoyed this. Hugs back at'cha. Dixie...lol...glad this gave you a chuckle Kit...SO good to see your name here, my friend. I've missed you. So happy you enjoyed this. Hugs! Kielo...thank you... glad you enjoyed it. Bugs too! Martie...thank you, my friend. I've missed you. redheart angrybraids...thank you. good to see you here. Barry...glad you enjoyed the 'barking', my friend. Thank you so much for reading and for the kind words. Thanks again, everyone! Love and hugs to all! ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-01-2003 05:31 PM).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LOL..talk about lunacy...  This is most humorous...(something about that clock reminds me of "Family Dog"...LOL) hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Are you sure? Interesting write!  |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
put a smile upon my dim face thank you for that |
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