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Skyfire
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0 posted 11-23-2003 08:39 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Skyfire


Is it wrong
to want to scratch your eyes out?
Probably;
So I won't tell the world
that my secret ambition
is
to
be

used until there's nothing left
of me to give to you;
because you just don't deserve me
but I keep giving and giving.

And waiting and waiting.

You think I'd have learned by now.
© Copyright 2003 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-23-2003 08:41 PM       View Profile for Snowflake From Hell   Email Snowflake From Hell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Snowflake From Hell

Sad as it is...hopeless love is always a tragedy

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies.   Dimmu Borgir

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2 posted 11-23-2003 09:44 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Eh...I know this feeling too well. I've learned all right...but I haven't learned to actually use the lessons of the past. Great job.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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3 posted 11-23-2003 10:30 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

You HAVE learned -- that there's more to love than deserving.....

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4 posted 11-24-2003 05:25 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Rhonda, it hurts so bad when we
learn from heartache. I hope things
are better real soon.
Hugs to you,  
Ethel
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5 posted 11-24-2003 05:37 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Well, things are resolved for now, we'll see what the future brings. Sometimes I think I'm too soft, and sometimes I know I'm too soft; other times I'm too content to care if I'm too soft or not. I know it's something I have to deal with, it's me who's gotta be the one who makes the stand, but for now...

We'll see.
Thanks for the replies and the support, it is truly appreciated

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

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6 posted 11-25-2003 07:51 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

That is why it is called experience dear girl. Because however slow you are learning. I do love your candor.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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7 posted 10-07-2004 12:56 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

They say if you don't learn the first time then similar experiences will happen over and over again until you finally learn...in my experience this has been true...I'm a slow learner...James
 
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