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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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it's hard for the words to come anymore they don't flow like they used to all that seems to be left is this red this damnable red that won't let me see that won't le me see anything but this this anger I am the cause I say that I am not, but I know I know that I was never like this before not even in my worst moments take these now and go because there is now one who lets me see all the colors not just this red ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I am tired . . . |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sven, you have been missed, have wondered about you. I hope that you are well. Such a strong write, of honest feelings... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This is... hopeful, frustrated, and something that makes one think. I hope things aren't going too badly for you... Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - good to read that the color of red is leaving. Good to see you again also my friend... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sven..let the anger go... It's SO good to see you m'friend! Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
add a little white?, I am sure you will see then....keep venting...it heals Lauren~ I had a dream last night |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wow haven't seen much from you! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Do you know it is lovely to see you writing again? I think writing these kinds of poems is good for you. They confront a part of you that you don't deal with very often. and? You have the other colors...now you can even have the paintbrushes to dip in them. please keep writing.. thats a very nicely stated order.  I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Oh Sven...do I know what you mean! Carry on, carry on! |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
good write |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, Its good to see you! I've missed your poetry. Keep writing it helps the anger flow. Take Care, :-) ~Laura~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I went through a time of that, and very recently. It does ease, though it leaves you and things around you changed in subtle ways. Hang in there. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
John, excellent write! i know the anger you speak of, keep writing my friend! it really does help to purge the soul of both anger and sadness and allow us to heal and emerge stronger. hmmm or something like that either way please take care. i've missed your writing! amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Always a treat2come across a poem you share PoetFriendSven... Happy Holidays2u Hugs *~coco~* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sven, you have been so missed! vent my friend.... and heal.... hugs.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Peace be with you my friend. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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