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Dance with my pen

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Margot
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Dance with my pen

When your soul left for the stars
I thought our dance had died
The keening wail, the heartless hole
Your absence left inside

Then I looked up and felt your smile
Whisper of words you impart
I knew with one sweet angel kiss
You found my confused heart

I feel your heart in words I pen
Our souls teach me to write
My faith is strong it leads me on
Traveling to the light

Never again will my soul be lost
It's bathed in the flow of your love
It bring me back to the inner core
Blessed with a light from above

Calling my feet to heed the dance
Lift me on gossamer wings
Calling to me to pen these words
That in my heart do sing

Margot Hill
23Nov03

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

© Copyright 2003 Margot Hill - All Rights Reserved
lil' Angel
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1 posted 11-23-2003 06:58 PM       View Profile for lil' Angel   Email lil' Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lil' Angel

What a beautiful poem.
Enchantress
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2 posted 11-23-2003 07:00 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Lovely...so very lovely.
Your pen has a very exquisite touch.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Varuch Elohim
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3 posted 11-23-2003 07:19 PM       View Profile for Varuch Elohim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Varuch Elohim

Very beautiful pen.

Varuch
Eloise
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4 posted 11-23-2003 11:05 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

I agree, this is very lovely indeed.
Margot
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5 posted 11-24-2003 07:24 AM       View Profile for Margot   Email Margot   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Margot's Home Page   View IP for Margot

Thank you all very much

Margot
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Absolutely gorgeous!

Deb
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A pleasure to read...James
Margot
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Deb & jamesMichael

Thank you very much

Margot
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