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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-11-23 03:31 PM

Quiet eyed advances to pine forest grove
A lazy day chances impromptu yellow drove
A roadside stop, discussions pause
Anticipated drives so high just because

Index to lip, a silent sent sign
And shadow you, your hand in mine
Along a path that we have forged
No bickered thorn or briar gorged

A prone approach to mercy’s kind
Yet spoken clearly heart and mind
And through the earth vibrations roar
To softer sighs and cries for more

Helpless turns unrushed, unheard
Into my heart pours forth each word
In coming of the cooler chills
Whispered on breezes our passion spills

Take me seasons full gauntlet prize
Fondle my soul in ecstatic wide eyes
Bathing in beauty I’ve waited to gaze
Whisk me to autumn in its spectacle daze

Copyright Kkh 11/23/03

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-11-23 03:45 PM

You have caught the atmosphere wonderfully.
Love, Margherita

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2003-11-23 04:07 PM

Absolutely fabulous writing here Kathleen. I enjoyed this very much.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-11-23 06:59 PM

K. you would make a truly great Meteorologist.

You can make any season so enjoyable with
your words...turning any thought into a
sensual masterpiece.

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

4 posted 2003-11-23 07:03 PM

Wonderful, enjoyed the flow of this piece.

SG

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2003-11-23 07:13 PM

This captured my imagination, Kathleen. I enjoyed the images and emotions that this write created for me.

believe in what your heart feels...

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-11-23 08:58 PM

ThisDiamond - A little different than what I'm used to reading from your pen. I like it...

BC

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

7 posted 2003-11-23 11:11 PM

An excellent read, Diamond.

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