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martiniat8
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0 posted 2003-11-21 01:27 PM




Tell me a story to make me fall in love again
whisper fond memories of good times we shared
Stir the sweetness that wants to flow
again
so near,
that a breath would ressurect me

Drape me with your silken curtain
and i will be fufilled
feeling loved for the first time

Tell me a story, while I sing you a song
that awakens me,
drawing my soul near
slipping into the passenger seat
my heart grows soft and serene
for my soul is swing



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1 posted 2003-11-23 12:50 PM


Very Beautiful, I hope you hear the words you long for....
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-11-23 01:04 PM


very romantic write, such longing and desire
Margherita
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3 posted 2003-11-23 01:12 PM


Sweet longing, nicely rendered.
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2003-11-23 01:36 PM


Very very beautiful and much enjoyed by this reader!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

martiniat8
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5 posted 2003-11-23 03:57 PM


Thank y'all so much
Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-11-23 08:47 PM


martiniat8 - once a long time ago........ Telling write from a heart soft...

BC

martiniat8
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7 posted 2003-11-23 09:16 PM


Maybe I misunderstood your comment, but do I know you, Bill?
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